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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I love the colors, and that you chose a blue bow as it really stands out from the whites and greens. The white flowers contrast nicely with the green tones in the background. Great work, there.
I also like the concept here! A lot of photographers use jars and put things in them, but I've never seen anything quite like this before. Is that a fish in there? Anyways, it adds a nice touch!
I think you could've been more creative with the composition, though. The photo is just too centered for my liking, and the way the white flowers kind of merge with the white spots up at the top just doesn't seem to work. My eyes are distracted by the white blotches in the background, and it takes too long for me to finally realize what this photo is trying to present.
If I were to tweak this photo, I would add a sharpening filter to really bring out the details, and also perhaps crop it into a square and use the rule of thirds effectively. I can't change the angle or composition for you, so just keep that in mind next time
Excellent work!
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