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Image size
1000x662px 474.72 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5100
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
200 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Oct 25, 2012, 5:40:38 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Excellent photo! It reminds me of a beautiful spring/summer day, which is a wonderful feeling atm since it is cold and rainy outside today <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle"/>

I love the colors, and that you chose a blue bow as it really stands out from the whites and greens. The white flowers contrast nicely with the green tones in the background. Great work, there.

I also like the concept here! A lot of photographers use jars and put things in them, but I've never seen anything quite like this before. Is that a fish in there? Anyways, it adds a nice touch!

I think you could've been more creative with the composition, though. The photo is just too centered for my liking, and the way the white flowers kind of merge with the white spots up at the top just doesn't seem to work. My eyes are distracted by the white blotches in the background, and it takes too long for me to finally realize what this photo is trying to present.

If I were to tweak this photo, I would add a sharpening filter to really bring out the details, and also perhaps crop it into a square and use the rule of thirds effectively. I can't change the angle or composition for you, so just keep that in mind next time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww"/>

Excellent work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" title="Love"/>